This week we have been doing free writing. I picked to write about my quad bike. What have you been writing about?
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Friday 3 May 2019
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Tēnā koe Connor!
ReplyDeleteWe liked that we have learned about your hobbies. I wonder how much all that money you would like is if you add it together? You'd be rich, Jayden said you'd be filthy rich! Maybe next time you could add in some extra information about all your bikes and money? Angel-Mey wants to know why you would buy all that stuff?
From TM2
Hi Emma. I like how you want a 80000000000 on a dirt bike. You did a good job! Do you have a playstation? From Emma
ReplyDeleteHi Emma! Thank you for asking if I have a playstation. I have two playstation 3’s, one at my mum’s and one at my dad’s and I have a quad. Have you got a playstation 3? From Connor
Deletewow connor that was an awsome pice of writing next time after your done just chek your writing
ReplyDeleteHi Connor. I thought your writing was very good. Maybe next time you can add in some more information about why you want to buy those motorbikes? I have a little question for you - why are you so interested in motorbikes?
ReplyDeleteFrom Angel-Mey:)