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Friday 16 April 2021

Camp Series - Post 2 - Archery

 Hi Bloggers  

I did Archery and I was really good  I pooped 2 balloons but Sahil beat me to the Campers cash it was really fun and it was probably the second funnest one I have done it before and it was really fun.


It has been very fun I enjoyed it very much I want to go back but can I.

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  1. Farzana7 May 2021 at 11:35

    Kia Ora Connor!
    I am Farzana, a student from Panmure Bridge School. I really enjoyed going through and reading the work you have shared. I have done archery before. I wasn't really good but I did get really close to the bullseye once. I haven't been to Waipara Adventure Centre but would love to go someday. I like how your DLO explains which archer you are and how many balloons you popped. In your DLO, I have spotted some minor grammar or spelling mistakes. Remember to use simple, compound and complex sentences to help people understand what you are trying to explain! Overall, your blogpost was really good and detailed.

    Thank you for sharing and keep the great efforts up!

    Farzana

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